I had given up my faith in newgrounds, i hadnt logged in for weeks because everything i saw was absoloute s***t. This has given me new hope and i had to log in to erview it and giv eyou a 5/5. I personally dont think you should make another episode, unless it is completely different with different themes, because this kinda thing you can't pull twice. leave it at one and it can become a great, any more than one and it will just become a series of beats and the animations meaningless. But seriously well done man, short, sweet, not pretentious, well done.
Best review ever! Thanks. I am making more though. This is a school project where I have to make 3 minute long animations. The concept behind them isn't so much to just keep redoing songs and making crazy beats to them. Its more about expressing the fantasies that occur in my head when I listen to music. Organ Donor broke up nicely into sections that could be seperated out and given to characters to enact. The next one won't be beat oriented. The third will be more like the first, but it won't be so much the slow build with a surprise at the end, as it will be some straight up rocking out. So as you suggested, it will be more individually theme based, rather than a rehashing of the first episode.
Anyways, glad I could bring you back to NG, at least for a little while. Thanks for your review.
I really don't know why, but i couldnt stand it. it didnt hold my attention, it didnt strike me as anything new, the graphics were ok but the sound was boring. i know its a trailer and all but really, if youre guna make a flash animation like an action film, get an action film trailer like flash to go with it. this is one of the least inspiring things ive seen on here. dissapointed. i mean when i see 'trailer' in the title i expect to have a hosrtt, 20-30 second flash, not really giving away much story line or details, that would make me want to see the rest. but no it was as long as a normal flash and it gave away a good deal of the story line, im sorry my friend but i think it was plain awful.
Doh :( Guess I can't please 'em all. Well it's a trailer for a longer story, which is being adapted to videogame format...
is this book on sale in England? The timing was perfect, true british humour. hope others like it!
That was inventive and you're one of few able to pull that kinda idea off. i think maybe a few sfx wouldnt go a miss in the beggining before the song. not a fan of link at all i really hate them however i can appreciate they were perfectly suited to the flash and well chosen. the graphics could have been improved but i just think thats a matter of time and studying other artist's work. good job mate i enjoyed it.
thanks alot! I'm glad you liked it :)
I originally intended to put in lightning/thunder/rain sounds but I had to leave them out in the end because of the filesize. :(
that was quite pathetic
when i first started watching i thought, this should be ok. after 5 minutes i was contemplating gouging my eyes out and ripping my ears off. i really do not see how anyone can find repeated phrases that funny. the music was awful, the voices were awful, the characters were disgustingly bad. the loan shark joke has been played a million times, a million times better and using the star wars theme tune made me cringe. please please can i ask a favour, never ever ever do anything publicly ever again.
It's a shame you didnt go ahead with the gouging. Ah well, there's always next time. Looking foward to it, buddy.x
5 years and youre still turning out shit like that, mate get new hobby.
Thanks for the constructive criticism, old chap. =P
Very god for a mouse drawn animation, and only 4 days! Blimey. I hope to see mroe from you.
That was truely moving, it was extremely well put together and it had me hipnotized to the screen for its duration. I thank you for making it.
That was good, didn't like the ending though, I thought it could have had much more potential than that. The first one had a bit of un-needed swearing which wasn't too great and i dont know what it is but theres a chattering clicking thing in the sound in this one which is very annoying. Other than that i like it. Keep it up!
That was a great piece of flash, reminded me of a film called spirited away.
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